Talk:Paul O'Neill

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This is part of an article I wrote for a sports writing class... not sure if this kind of article is out of line or not, so I decided to post it. - Smocko

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Isn't this page a little biased? 67.87.184.150 22:10, 24 July 2007 (EDT)


Ouch. Definitely. Who wants to take a crack at making it more neutral? - --Mischa 08:32, 25 July 2007 (EDT)

I messed with it a bit. 67.87.184.150 19:51, 7 August 2007 (EDT)

Thanks. Looks much better now. - --Mischa 12:28, 8 August 2007 (EDT)

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